Contest Entry

I've decided to join Christmas All Year Round Writing Contest. It is actually my first time so I'm a little nervous here, but then again it's all about improving your writing in the end and seeing your capabilities. Here's my submission:

Applicant's Username: ChocoPocky
Submission Title: Euphoria's Distance
Type of Work: Chaptered, AU, War
URL/Link: Here

Here's the plot, any suggestions or corrections?

Torn between her beliefs, Semi has vanished from her home to fight for the war that has been tearing the lands apart.

When the Snows declared war against the Light clan, the Shadows are in fear of being infiltrated by rebels. The government had then adjudicated upon passing a decree stating that all above eighteen years of age must serve the war or face execution.

How will one find happiness when all that remains is hostility and abhorrence?